小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

文中词汇使用较丰富恰当，但高级词汇表达还需要很大提升；正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；建议加强过渡词和衔接词的积累，文章结构不严谨。

Zhao Guangli is my best friend. She is a comely girl. She is twenty eight years old .She was born on Rizhao Shangdong province. She is straightforward. We can see each other on weekends. Last Sunday we went to go shopping. She purchased a beautiful skirt and she said that she like my skirt. I am so surprised. She has a baby, her name is Ningning. She is very lovely. My friend's husband is a driver.