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When you heard something or you saw something,maybe you believe that, i think you maybe wrong,you should know about the thing's reasons.the conclusion was got that you need check many things, no check no say.sometimes we can't believe our eyes and ears.we need to beliveve fact. When we found the things having some mistakes,we should tell ourselves that we need to find the true thing
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