句式变化较为明显,另外句法层面做的不错;文章用词太过单一,要仔细检查单词拼写;语言不流畅。
When you heard something or you saw something,maybe you believe that. I think you maybe wrong, you should know about the thing's reasons.the conclusion wassummarized that you need check many matters. Sometimes we can't believe our eyes and ears. we need to beliveve fact. When we found the matters having some mistakes,we should tell ourselves that we need to find the true matters Please investigating everything you thought badly, we need to doubt everything.
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