加强一些长句和复杂句的使用;文中用词稍显贫乏,单词拼写还要加强;建议加强过渡词和衔接词的积累,文章结构不严谨。
lee is my friend,he is a student , he is a tall boy .he likes reading . He and I always go to travel around china . we go to school togather every morning . he is good at maths and Endlish , he is a smart boy.we play football togather in the holiday .