复杂句使用不错,句法规范;语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者词汇量偏小,另外文章有些单词拼写错误。
I have a good friend,He is a clever boy,He is good at football,We play football together on weekend,He always helps me,He is fifteen years old,Our classmates also like him,My teacher like him very much,because he is the best student in our class.We go to gardon together on weekend for playing.