高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

文章层次清晰分明，但是文中很少使用过渡词和衔接词；文章词汇使用比较恰当，高级词汇积累不足；句法知识掌握不错，但文中从句数量偏少。

Long time ago my hometown was a beautiful town where was surrounded by green trees,the river water was pure and there were many fish in the river.The houses were simple and crude,the streets were narrow.The people worked from morining to evening,they lived a poor life.But now everything is been changed,there are many buildings and factories and shops,there are so many cars in the street,the industry develops quickly and the environment are deteriorating.The trees are reducing and fish are disappearing.It is urgent to administer pollution.