2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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In recently.It is worthy paying more attention to education . Form the dates we can find that the Doctoral degree's weekly earning is more hight three than the weekly earning of the Less than high school diploma and people with Less than high school diploma whose hightly unemplyment rate. In my opoin,knowledge can make money.We must study hard,govement should promote us study.