2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

如果增加些复杂句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用；文章用词太过单一，注意少数拼写错误；连词使用偏少。

Nothing succeeds without a Strong Will Are you have become a successful person ?if not,you are short of Strong.It is essential to obtain successful for the person. Suppose you are a student ,if you are not to learn ,it is useless for the contry. You must have confident to finish the task in the future.