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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40870
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
用户的作文(系统评分79.0分
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语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者词汇基础很好,也能较灵活使用高级词汇,望继续努力;作者句法知识掌握的不够好,可适当增加从句的使用。

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In order to allow us to remit the residual funds to Koch Chemical Technology Group Mauritius, Inc. as well as, make up payments (these payments), do not let Shanghai New WOFE to help with the payment, we must complete the following works as soon as possible: 1.We have sent 4 mails to Michael, please sent the color scanning to us at the first after your signature, and afterward sent the original documents to us, which can help us more efficient . 2. Signing the Employees of Compensation (the compensation rate had been approved by management which is the same rate as all former employees in Wuxi WOFE, the average wage including the salary of 13 months), please sign as soon as possible, to help complete the liquidation of remittance. 3. The donated IT assets and the rest documents in Wuxi Office are required to shipped to Shanghai New WOFE. Today afternoon (December 27th), we have told with William Li again, he said that he only have time come to Wuxi for shipment in the week of January 9th, we say this is too late and ask him for help, he promised to Wuxi before this Friday and next week for shipment to Shanghai, we will urge his every day to ask for his help.

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