Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
全文结构较为严谨;简单的使用了一些复杂句,但从句使用不充分;文章能较灵活地使用部分学术词汇,但词汇表达丰富度不足。
Education Pay and Unemployment rates It's important expenditure for Education Pay in China,also every family in order to child's future be able to find a work. Actually,Data indicate that more Education Pay the unemployment rate more lower.In many work,people pay 1665$ for professional in every week,the same time profeessional degree unemployment rate only 2.4% in 2011.However,less than high school is people Education Pay the lesst amount of the expenditure ,it's unemployment rate is the highest . As can be seen from these figures, unemployment and education pay has a lot to do,higher vocational education spending unemployment rate lower.Therefore we attach great importance to education.