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Now, the society is full of different people and things. So we are living in a complex and changeable group. In such circumstance,everybody needs a clearly brain especially when some events occurred and we need to remind ourself and others it is unwise to work out a decision immediately. We are living in a rich and colorful world and we are likely to see and hear various things in our life every day. But how can we do when we meet some events? Before we take measures we should bear in mind that we have to analyze the nature of the thing and not present a conclusion just according to the superficial phenomenon. As one idiom we have always said:''See nature through the phenomena'', this sentence told us that it is not true you have seen and heard. From what has been discussed above, sometimes eyes and ears are the worst witness. So it requires us to exert our logical thinking.
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