2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

从句使用量不足；文中有几处拼写错误，应增加高级词汇的使用；不能熟练使用过渡词，基本没有衔接词。

Computer begin to come into our life slowly, it help us to deal with a lot of affairs and reduce our pressure. So now many persons can work high efficency and spend less time to work. I think more perpons can't leave off computer and now computer have been the member of our family. We can study more knowlege, buy ticket ,work,write letter,play games and so on by computer. Maybe we face computer more time than our lover. Although computer can do many things for us, but we can't addict computer. If we benifit computer well, we can get more,or we may be lost more. Please company with computer better,our life will be better.