2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

文中词汇表达丰富度不足，一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活；全文结构较为严谨；简单的使用了一些复杂句，但从句使用不充分。

Education and Unemployment It's important pay for Education Pay in China,also every family in order to child's future be able to find a work. Actually,Data indicate that much Education Pay the unemployment rate more lower.In much work,people pay 1665$ to professional degree in every week,the same time professional degree unemployment rate only 2.4% in 2011.However,least than high school is person Education Pay the lesst amount of the expenditure,it's unemployment rate is the highest . As can be seen from these figures, unemployment and education pay has a lot to do,higher vocational education spending unemployment rate lower.Therefore we attach great importance to education.