2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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Computer begins to come into our life slowly, it helps us to deal with a lot of affairs and reduce our pressure. So now many persons can work high efficiency and spend less time to work. I think more persons can't leave off computer and now computer has been the member of our family. We can study more knowlege, buy ticket ,work,write letter,play games and so on by computer. Maybe we face computer more time than our lover. Although computer can do many things for us, we can't addict computer. If we benifit computer well, we can get more,or we may be lost more. Please company with computer better,our life will be better.