2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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Education Pay and Unemployment rates It's important pay for Education Pay in China,also every family in order to child's future be able to find a work. Actually,Data indicate that much Education Pay the unemployment rate more lower.In much work,people pay 1665$ to professional degree in every week,the same time professional degree unemployment rate only 2.4% in 2011.However,hiah school education pay is least than other education pay,in the same time it's unemployment rate much highest. As can be seen from these figures, unemployment and education pay has a lot to do,higher vocational education spending unemployment rate lower.Therefore we attach great importance to education.