2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

文中高级词汇使用较少，但单词拼写做的很棒；句式变化多样，句法方面做的很棒；文中基本没有过渡词和衔接词，建议增加衔接词汇的积累。

The computer begins to come into our life slowly, it helps us to deal with a lot of affairs and reduce our pressure. So now many persons can work high efficiency and spend less time working. I think more persons can't leave off computer and now computer has been the member of our family. We can get more knowledge, buy ticket ,work,write letter,play games and so on by computer. Maybe we face computer more time than our lover. Although computer can do many things for us, we can't addict computer. If we use computer well, we can get more,or we may be lost more. Please company with computer better, our life will be better.