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Dear Mary: I am very glad to hear that you will arrivel in my hometown.Istill remember that you and your families are very friendly.because of your referral about your hometown’s sight spots ,I have learned so much knowledge .now ,you will arrive in my hometown and I decide to introduce the most place of my hometown to you . My hometown is located in YUNNAN which is a very beautiful place in China.in YUNNAN ,LiJiang is the most beautiful place and I and my families also live in LiJianghi’s . First LiJiang’s buildings are very ancient.so they are very delicate and historical.if you visit them,you will learn about Chinese culture and open your eyes. Second,LiJiang’s cate is very ample and taste good.For example,thechilli paste,the hams,the fish and so on.there is no doubt that you will love them . Thrdly ,LiJiang’s environment is very good.the air is fresh,the water is graceful,the streets are so clean and so on. Finally,LiJiang’people are very kind ,they wii help you when you need and welcome you to LiJiang. Yours:LiHua
