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2013年专四作文真题附范文:节约花钱

发布时间:2013-06-07 13:03浏览次数:33559
要求:
Most of us, as students, are careful with our money in daily life: we collect all kinds of coupons(优惠券); we look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel; we don't buy clothes unless in a sale. However, some people think that all this may not make us smart consumers. What is your opinion?

You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
In the second part, provide one or two reasons or your experience (s) to support your opinion. 
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

You should supply an appropriate title for your composition.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, language and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

字数:300 满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分77.5分
评语:

作者词汇基础很好,也能较灵活使用高级词汇,望继续努力;从句比例偏少,简单句稍微偏多了;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。

用户练习作文:

Different people have different ideas about the same question. As far as I’m concerned, I think that if you want to learn a foreign language well. You should use these ways. First, you should learn it from the beginning of simple. Second, haste makes waste , you should spend much time in reading and listening lots of materials. Third, you should also obey the principle of repetition. Repetition is the mother of skilled. Last but not least , interest is play an important roles in your life no matter what you do. It’s the best teacher, so we should develop an interest. There are some good strategies for learning a foreign language. First , you should set a goal ,then hard work . Second you should have enough vocabulary , you can express your ideas only in this way . Third , you should catch any chance to speak or to write. You know , we always grow up in practice . Finally , the most important thing is to review . As Confucius said ‘learning the new by review the old.’ There are some ideas about learning a foreign language. First, learning the correct pronunciation and try to repetition .as we know pronunciation is the basic of foreign language . Second, reading foreign literature as much as you can, knowing the foreign history is benefit to understand foreign language Third, practicing your oral language every day and remember the words as much as possible.

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