采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;能够熟练使用从句并合理分配;作者能较好的使用一些高级词汇,但请注意单词拼写的检查。
i aways see people eating on metro and holding a loud coservation in public. in compus, things like scrawing on the desk, ditching classess, stealing bicycles and impolite occupy seats happen frequently. i still remember tne last time i visited the tongli town,many people wrote on the wall, i was very angry because it is a bad manner.
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