从句和复杂句用的不错,但部分句子还有一些小问题;采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者能较灵活地使用词汇,高级词汇使用较恰当,但存在一些拼写错误。
i always see people eating on metro and holding a loud coservation in public. in compus, things like scrawing on the desk, ditching classes, stealing bicycles and impolite occupy seats happen frequently. i still remember tne last time i visited the tongli town,many people wrote on the wall, i was very angry because it is a bad manner.
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