采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;从句使用很不错,再接再厉;作者词汇表达较丰富,高级词汇需继续加强,拼写检查要重视。
i always see people eating on metro and holding a loud coservation in public. in compus, things like scrawling on the desk, ditching classes, stealing bicycles and impolite occupy seats happen frequently. i still remember tne last time i visited the tongli town,many people wrote on the wall, i was very angry because it is a bad manner.when it comes to the manner of being a guest of someone's house, firstly, we should arrive on time.
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