结构良好,但是语言不流畅;错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;文中拼写错误比较多,用词也稍显贫乏。
my hometown is a small vallege in the south eastern of China, there are lots of mountains and steams around the vallege. I think the most beautiful place is the mountain behind the vallege. In spring, you can see followers and butterflies. In summer, the temepreture of there is very confitable.