作者词汇量积累不错,高级词汇积累较少;从句数量偏少;衔接成分偏少。
Never will I forget the moment when I first caught the sight of my new campus. That is wonderful! There are especially a lot of ginkgo trees in the school. It is picturesque in autumn leaves yellow. What attracts me most is that a peculiar school-library, that’s great, right? I very much look forward to it soon will open to us. For the people around me,what impress me most is that my classmates are diligent and out-going. It is willing of me to get along with them and to learn as soon as possible a lot of things from them. They usually help me with pleasure. They both are my friends and my teachers. In addition, my new teachers are all responsible and easy-going. High school course is more difficult than middle school course. I will be full of energy to face the challenge. I will also do more exercise to keep fit so that I could study hard to improve their result, live up to the expectations of parents and teachers. How exciting a new life is! I am satisfied with my new school,and you? Give my best regards to your parents. I’m looking forward to your reply.