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高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

发布时间:2013-05-16 16:20浏览次数:22881
要求:
某英文杂志新设“我的家乡”专栏向读者征文,请按下面提供的要点写一篇100个词左右的短文,介绍你的家乡过去的情况和现在的变化,向该杂志投稿。短文标题已给出。
过去:家乡小镇绿树环抱;小河清清鱼儿嬉戏;房屋简陋 街道狭窄;人们劳作生活清贫;现在:高楼大厦厂店林立;大小车辆驰骋街头;工业发展环境恶化;树木减少鱼儿消失;治理污染当务之急。
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作者词汇量积累不错,高级词汇积累较少;从句数量偏少;衔接成分偏少。

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Never will I forget the moment when I first caught the sight of my new campus. That is wonderful! There are especially a lot of ginkgo trees in the school. It is picturesque in autumn leaves yellow. What attracts me most is that a peculiar school-library, that’s great, right? I very much look forward to it soon will open to us. For the people around me,what impress me most is that my classmates are diligent and out-going. It is willing of me to get along with them and to learn as soon as possible a lot of things from them. They usually help me with pleasure. They both are my friends and my teachers. In addition, my new teachers are all responsible and easy-going. High school course is more difficult than middle school course. I will be full of energy to face the challenge. I will also do more exercise to keep fit so that I could study hard to improve their result, live up to the expectations of parents and teachers. How exciting a new life is! I am satisfied with my new school,and you? Give my best regards to your parents. I’m looking forward to your reply.

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