新东方托福高分作文:对家长和孩子来说游戏都同等重要吗?

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Personally, I am quite agree with this opinion. For children, they can get a lot of fun from playing the games. What's more, they may make some good friends while playing games with others. When I was young, I usually play games with my neighbors. We had a wonderful time every day and we grew fast and healthy. We like kicking shuttlecock. For adults, they also need games to release their stress and relax themselves. However, the games might be different. Adults will feel the games children playing are't intrested enough, they may play different games, like chess or something. All the same, games to give us recreation and fun. Whether how old we are, games should give same priority.