2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

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recently,many thing that we by on excessive packaging.It makes people look beautiful,but we want to get the goods let's pay more money. There is three reasons for on excessive packaging.Firstly,our life is more and more better.When the day is expecil we must by something for somebody.Secondly,in our work,sometime we have to by a little tings for us cooprates .Third,many goods if it looks good it will sell a good price. In my opoin,on excessive pakaging very polution.when our friend's birthday we could do something by ourselve.The government should take powerful in it.