加强一些长句和复杂句的使用;作者词汇表达较丰富,高级词汇需继续加强,拼写检查要重视;连接词过少,建议增加衔接词汇的积累。
My best friend My best friend is Lise.He has a big eyes.He is very friendly with someone.I very like him.He can sing and play the piano.When he play the piano Iam very happy.He grades is very good,too.We often go to the cinema together.He always help some people.One day,a people who lie on the street ,he saw.Almost everyone seem doesn'tsee him.But he run there and took him to the hospital.Thanks for Lise ,the people begaved.Thisis my best friend Lise.