小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

简单句比重过高，另应加强复杂句的练习；文中用词稍显贫乏，单词拼写还要加强；过渡词和衔接词使用欠丰富，层次欠清晰；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。

I have a good friend. Her name is Lily. She is twenty. She has a long hair and she is very tall. We always play games together. We both like singing and dancing. Last sunday, we went to a bar, we sang a song together. The crawd people began to cheer.