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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8971
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分58.0分
评语:

从句使用量不足,应增加从句和复合句的使用;文中高级词汇不足;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。

用户练习作文:

In our life we meet a person at first time and judge him by bis appearance many times. I think this is many persons' problems.we usually say a strange man is honest person or a crafty person only by appearance,not others.In fact i think it is unwise. when you wanna know a person,i suggest you should talk about sth, listen his words, observe his behavior and expression,and then you should commucate with his friends,classmates ,colleges,leaders and the other persons,you can know more things from the other side.you can know the whole person. If you get a good result,congulationgs you win,you are wise not only by appearance.

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