2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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My view on online Shopping Online Shopping is becoming more and more popular for most people. On online Shopping,I have different ideas. First,it is essential to convenient people's life.To some people,they are busy with their work.So they are not energy to go Shopping.Second,you can choose more things from different area. But every coin has two sides.It also cheat customer through this platform.Wo can obtain worng information so that wo are cheated. As far as I am concerned,online Shopping is good for busying people.