2015年高考作文优秀范文：登山活动

句式变化多样，句法方面做的很棒；文章词汇表达灵活恰当，也能较熟练地使用一定的高级词汇；不能熟练使用过渡词，文章结构欠佳。

Mountain climbing is one of the popular sports in Xing Guang High School. As the school's journalist of English Newspaper, I reported the Daqing Mountain climbing in April 10th.Daqing Mountain is 10000 feet high and it will take 4 hours at least for the whole journey. It's a big challenge for all participants. But everyone didn't give up and finally got the top of the mountain through their own effort. The view on the top of the mountain was so beautiful that no one wanted to get down. No give up was the spirit not only in the whole climbing but in all their lifes.