2015年高考作文优秀范文：登山活动

文中词汇使用较丰富恰当，但高级词汇表达还需要很大提升；句式变化多样，句法方面做的很棒；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

Mountain climbing is one of the popular sports in Xing Guang High School. As the school's journalist of English Newspaper, I reported the Daqing Mountain climbing in April 10th.Daqing Mountain is 10000 feet high and it will take four hours at least for the whole journey. It's a big challenge for all participants. But everyone didn't give up and finally got the top of the mountain through their own efforts. The view on the top of the mountain was so beautiful that no one wanted to get down. No give up was the spirit not only in the whole climbing but in all their lives.