参考词汇:
中秋节 the Mid-Autumn Festival 农历 lunar calendar
赏月 enjoy the full moon 月饼 moon cake文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用高级词汇就更好了;句式变化多样,句法方面做的很棒;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳。
The Mid-Autumn Festival, in lunar August 15th, is one of many traditional festivals in China. Families have a reunion on this day. We all like the day that we can do many traditional activities. First of all we will enjoy the full moon with the families and eat moon cake under the moon light. And then we will pay a visit to the friends not seen for a long time and maybe have a trip sometimes.