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Many persons are busy everyday, they maybe never consider thier the meaningful of life. In fact as a human we can't like annimal the same,sometimes we should stop our step and have a rest,and then think a lot why are we busy.What are we working for? I think few people think about the problem, If you don't spend some time to give youself,your life will fill with difficults and troubles.untill your life ending,you are aslo a loser. so we leave some time to think about the meaningful of life,we will get more,we will success.
