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从句数量偏少；文中词汇使用较丰富，但高级词汇使用太少；恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词，衔接手法做的很棒。
Many persons are busy every day, they maybe never consider their the meaningful of life. As a human we can't like animal the same, sometimes we should stop our step and have a rest,and then think a lot why are we busy.What are we working for? I think few people think about the problem, if you don't spend some time to give youselves,your life will fill with difficulties and troubles.Until your life ending,you are also a loser. so we leave some time to think about the meaningful of life,we will get more,we will success.
