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2006年专八英语作文真题:Ambition

发布时间:2013-05-18 17:01浏览次数:3429
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题目 Ambition
说明 Joseph Epstein, a famous American writer, once said, "We decide what is important and what is trivial in life we decide that what makes us significant is either what we do or what we refuse to do but no matter how indifferent the universe may be to our choices and decisions, these choices and decisions are ours to make. We decide. We choose. And as we decide and choose, so are our lives formed. In the end, forming our own destiny is what ambition is about do you agree or disagree with him?
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1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:300满分:100分
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可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用;采用了一些简单的从句;文中缺乏丰富的词汇表达,但词汇拼写要更加认真;请注意分段;连词使用偏少。

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As Joseph Epstein, a famous American writer said,the different choice and decisions made by ourselves decide who you are. and the ambition palys a inportant role. As the Napoleon once said" the soldier who do not want to be a general is not a good one". we can see that the great ambition of Napoleon. and it is no doubt that he try his best to fullfilt his dream and become a hero in that time

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