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My school My school's name is lujia. It is near the library and PE palace. I usually go to school on foot. There is a long river in the south of school. There have five teaching buildings. It includes music rooms and art rooms and computer rooms. Our class room is in the second floor. The music room is in the fifth floor. I like singing in this room. There is a big playground. We often play games and run on it.Also our teacher is kindly and polite. However, I like this school very much.