2013年5月11日雅思大作文真题:生活质量下降的原因和解决方案

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These days many people are concerned about the descending of living quality in large cities and showing their resolution to find out the causes and get these problems resolved. The reasoning process can be very complicated since there causes contributing the fall of living quality are multiple.The most pressing problem people are suffering is the air pollution that wraps the sky that makes us blind from beautiful views and chokes our limited lung cells to death.The second and be the stress people get from their work that pushes people to the limit to bring their potential into full play.Everything will be vulnerable when it reaches its limit.The last one I have to mention is the safty of food because urbanization means industralization instead of agriculturaliztion,all the food consumed are growed by business groups which intend to maximize their profits and very likely to use some chemicals that help their crops grow better, but that it poisonous to its consumers. Threats to human beings have never been diminished,but solutions is always more than problems.Shutting down the dioxide generating factories and planting more trees will greatly benifit our environment.People need to take the issue of being stressed out seriously,enough and moderate exercise and joyful family time spent are very effective to cope with being over-whelmed.Strict laws against illegal products and effective implementation of them will minimize the contaminated food provision.