文中词汇使用较丰富恰当,但高级词汇表达还需要很大提升;正确句子的比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;建议加强过渡词和衔接词的积累,文章结构不严谨。
It's useful and necessary to discuss learning habits. Every student do well at school always has good learning habits. On the contrary, the students that don't have good learning habits always perform bad at school. Now I want to share my experience of my learning habits. Reading is very important for learning language. Therefore I read some original books an hour per day. Nonetheless my English is still not very good. Only reading is not enough. I need more talking, more listening, more writing.