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Due Attention Should Be Given To the Study of Chinese Nowdays, more and more students have great interests in studying foreign language. So they give less time in learning Chinese. A number of factors might contribute to the phenomenon. The begin with, some students want to go abroad for further study. Further more, with the development of the world econic, they think a secodary language will be good for them to find a better job. Finally, taey think they will not have any problem to communicate with foreigners.So is it really good? How about the consequences? It can reduce students' interests in Chinese and has influence in Chinese Culture.As far as I am concerned, I think we should pay more attention to study Chinese. It's high time we should do somenting to protect our language.For one thing, our government should hold the idea that students should learn Chinese。For another, the school should have Chinese classed as a complusory curriculum. With the efforts all parts concerned, the problem will be solved.