2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；文章层次不够分明，缺少组织，需注意文章整体的组织结构；作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练，单词拼写方面要更仔细。

Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will A strong will is a good way to success.I promised a word:no pain no gain.Other,beside the pain,a strong will also a key to challenge difficult.If you want to be success,but you don't have a strong will,so you could meet some stresses,some sad things,some problem that you don't know how to solve it.So,a strong will is very impertant! Have a strong will's people also have a braight heart.They can solve a lot of problems and beat some difficult.They can complish theirs assignment.If you want to have a strong will,you must keep your mind and never give up your dream.Promised the practice everyday can make you perfect. Not only adults,but also students like this.Not study hard,you would never be an ability people.But if you try your best and have a strong will,i think you can be a secceed man in the fruture.