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假设你正在参加江苏省中学生英语演讲比赛，请针对有些父母亲经常翻看孩子日记或书包这一现象，写一篇演讲稿，陈述你的观点。
演讲稿的主要内容应包括：
认为同学们不必为此烦恼，，希望能够体谅父母的苦衷。
建议以谈话、写信等方式与父母交流和沟通。
3．开头和结尾已为你写好，不计人总词数。
文中词汇表达贫乏，但是单词拼写做的不错；复杂句使用不错，句法规范；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。
It's harmful for us,we want our parents to know that we are independent people.we should have secrets of ourselves.If we have something to talk with,we should talk with our parents,but permit us to keep a little secrets,I think when you our parents are in the childhood,you have your secrets also.Please don't say we are still child.we have thought of ourselves.but I think our parents are caring about us,so they want know everything of us. so we should tell some our secrets to our parents,it can make our parents' heart in their bucket.
