从句数量偏少;作者能较灵活地使用高级词汇,但要注意减少拼写错误;采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰。
Nowadays, an increasing number of museums are open to the public with free admission. A variety of political, cultural and educational programs sponsored by musems has been attracting more and more visitors to the museums, where they can gain knowledge about history, literature, art, science and so on. Some museums have become a good resort for people to leisurely enjoy the weekends and holidays. However, free admission to museums may cause several negative problems as well. With the increase of visitors, there is possibility that displays of the museums are subject to damage to some extent. Another problem is that many museums are in urgent need of extra funds to perserve displays, maintian exhibition space, update facilities and carry on daily administration. Besides, some visitors litter, spit, make big noise and wreck properties in the museums and their bad behaviors severely affect the environment and museum management. I highly appreciate free-access to museums since it is a good policy for the public. In my opinion it is conductive to the raising of people’s cultural qualities and the construction of a civilized society. Therefore, more museums and art galleries should be open to the public free of charge. The government should grant more financial assistence to the free-admission museums, and, on the nother hand, the museums should take some effecitve measure to imporve their management so that they can provide better service to the public.