2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

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recently,many things that we by on excessive packaging.It makes look beautiful,but we want to get the goods let's pay more money. There are three reasons for on excessive packaging.Firstly,our life is more and more better.When the day is expecil we must by something for somebody.Secondly,in our work,sometime we have to by a little tings for us cooprates .Third,many goods if it looks fine it will sell a good price. In my opoin,on excessive packaging very polution.when our friend's birthday we could do something by ourselves.The government should take mighty in it.