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Dear Bob,
I’m sorry to hear that you are always nervous about tests. Here is some advice you.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours, Li Hua
作者词汇基础扎实；正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；过渡词和衔接词使用欠丰富，层次欠清晰。
Dear Bob, I’m sorry to hear that you are always nervous about tests. Here is some advice you. Above all, you should have a positive attitude. You should work hard regularly and make good preparations for tests. Besides, you should exercise regularly and have enough sleep. By doing these, you will be full of energy. Moreover, you should have a healthy diet. Nothing is more important than health. And what's more, you should take a deep breathe before tests. That can help you relax yourself. All in all, you needn't be nervous though tests are important. Good luck! Yours, Li Hua
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