2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

从句使用量不足，应增加从句和复合句的使用；文章词汇表达丰富，不过拼写检查还需加强；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

The Golden Week refers to the continuous seven days holiday of the China. In 1999, China has lanuched the policy of the Golden Week. After that day, the Golden Week has enriched people's daily life and promoted the development of social economy by encouraging people to travel and consume. However, there is no doubt that the Golden Week brings about sime evident problems, such as crowded transport, crowded people in the travel spot and arised price. In 2012, Chinese goverment announced that the high-speed road of China can free pass in the significant holidaies which including two holidaies of seven daies of Festival Spring and 10.1. But this policy also lead to the increasing of commute vehicle and population in some degree.