句式变化多样,句法方面做的很棒;作者词汇基础扎实,注意文中极个别的拼写错误;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。
The Golden Week refers to the continuous seven-day holiday of China. In 1999, China has launched the policy of the Golden Week. Since then, the Golden Week has enriched people's daily life and promoted the development of social economy by encouraging people to travel and consume. However, there is no doubt that the Golden Week brings about some evident problems, such as crowded transport, crowded people in the travel spot and rising prices. In 2012, Chinese government announced that the high-speed road of China can free pass in the significant holidaies which including two holidays of seven days of Festival Spring and 10.1. But this policy also leads to the increasing of commute vehicle and population in some degree.
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