小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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Lily is my best friend,she is tall ,she has a big black eyes,and she has lenght hairs,I like pay game with her.One day ,she study is very good, i hope that i can learn with her and she can help me . we are farvori fish,cake,meat,coffe....,we are go to school together.