2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

作者词汇基本功很好，但在高级词汇的积累上还要努力；文中衔接词丰富；文中从句数量稍显不足，注意个别有错误的句子。

shopping is one of the most interesting thing in women's world. they will choose the way that shopping to relieve the pression. it's people usually called "shopaholic ". in contrary traditional shopping modle, many people perfer online shopping for this years. no any doubt, associated with the internet technic develop, enormous online shopping platform are everywhere on the internet world. i'm a person who often spend a lot of salary on online shopping. i think it attract to me is convenience. for instance, when you watch a korean drama, the actress's dress, makeup, bag and shoes etc, surely interested you. you can search it immediately on taobao that is the biggest e-commerce in China. the another major reason which make me choose online shopping is no need bargain. Most of people have such experience like this: when you look like one skirt, your burget is about 200 yuan, but the owne prise it on 400 yuan. you know the order is too high to pay. but bargain always embarrace.