小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

文中词汇使用较丰富，但高级词汇使用太少；衔接成分偏少；增加一些从句的使用，文章会更棒。

I have many friends, one of my best friends is JJ, he is a 18 years old boy. he has a bright eyes, a big nose and a handsome face.he likes playing football. we often play together. he would not hesitate to help his friends when they are dismayed. his school record is very outstanding, and thus he achives awards several times.from my point of view, his has a mild character, he is a kind person. we all like this boy.