文中词汇使用较丰富,但高级词汇使用太少;文章上下文衔接自然;错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练。
I have many friends, but one of my best friends is JJ, he is a 18-years-old boy. He has a bright eye, a big nose and a handsome face. He likes playing football, and we often play together. He would not hesitate to help his friends when they are dismayed. His school record is very outstanding, too, and thus he achives awards several times.From my point of view, his has a mild character, he is a kind person. We all like this boy.